HW 3.25
학생이 쓴 원문
I think that someone who committed a crime for some good cause should get punished, but also be given consideration. If someone committed a crime to protect myself, it should be considered in this situation.
It\'s difficult to judge what is reasonable and making citizens accept it.
Our society has a legal system, so we should respect this. The more we don\'t respect the justice system, the more we could commit crimes.
I heard that there are a lot of crimes and people are dying in Mexico, because their cops and militaries don\'t protect the citizens, so they also started killing and stabbing criminals. It\'s so sad. Maybe normal people don\'t want to hurt others, but the environment makes them commit crimes.
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>>> Correct! Very good sentences!
It\'s difficult to judge what is reasonable and making citizens accept it.
Our society has a legal system, so we should respect this. The more we don\'t respect the justice system, the more we could commit crimes.
>>> Correct!
Or: It\'s difficult to judge what is reasonable and make citizens accept it...
I heard that there are a lot of crimes and people are dying in Mexico, because their cops and militaries don\'t protect the citizens, so they also started killing and stabbing criminals. It\'s so sad. Maybe normal people don\'t want to hurt others, but the environment makes them commit crimes.
>>> I heard that there are a lot of crimes and people are dying in Mexico because their cops and militaries don\'t protect the citizens, so they also started killing and stabbing criminals. It\'s so sad. Maybe normal people don\'t want to hurt others, but the environment makes them commit crimes. Correct! Very good sentences!
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