HW 3/25, Diary : We need a healing.

2013-03-26 · 첨삭 강사 Grace

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HW1have to2has to3have to4has to5have to6has to7have to8have to9has to10has to[Diary]I was tired today.I had a half sleep since my son was awaken most of the time during that night.Lunch time was not relaxable because our team had a lunch with our director.He asked many pending issues on our work,so it was impossible for us to finish our dishes quickly,and have a power nap during the rest of the time.In the afternoon,I was tortured by my colleague who used my computer for reading a financial report instead of finding it in his emails.On my way home,I felt very tired.All of a sudden,I got an idea that I need to do something to heal myself.We are not energetic every time.Disease doesn't intrude our life abruptly.It approaches to our body step by step as stress is accumulated day by day.People usually refresh themselves during the specific time like weekends,or summer vacation.It's okay,but it will be better for people to get out of a stressful situation whenever they confront it.

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Hi [이름]! Thank you for sharing something about your day! I agree that it\'s good to find some time to relax ourselves away from a very stressful environment. It can also be helpful to think of happy memories so that you can somehow soothe the negative feelings you have in mind. Anyway, today is our last day. +.+ I am really hoping that when you come back, I can still have the privilege to be your teacher! ^^ I\'ll see you then later! Cheerios! Tecaher GRACE HW 1have to >> Correct 2has to >> Correct 3have to >> Correct 4has to >> Correct 5have to >> Correct 6has to >> Correct 7have to >> Correct 8have to >> Correct 9has to >> Correct 10has to[Diary] >> Correct I was tired today.I had a half sleep since my son was awaken most of the time during that night. >> I was so tired today because I didn\'t get enough my sleep since my baby stood awake during the night. Lunch time was not relaxable because our team had a lunch with our director. >> My lunch time was not relaxing due to our team\'s lunch meeting with the director. He asked many pending issues on our work,so it was impossible for us to finish our dishes quickly,and have a power nap during the rest of the time. >> Correct >> He asked a lot of questions regarding some pending issues at work so we weren\'t able to wash the dishes quicly and took a power nap afterwards. In the afternoon,I was tortured by my colleague who used my computer for reading a financial report instead of finding it in his emails. >> In the afternoon, I was tortured by my colleague who used my computer to read his financial report instead of finding those readings on his emails. On my way home,I felt very tired.>> Correct All of a sudden,I got an idea that I need to do something to heal myself. >> Correct We are not energetic every time.Disease doesn\'t intrude our life abruptly. >> Correct >> We are not energetic all the time. It approaches to our body step by step as stress is accumulated day by day. >> A disease approaches our body slowly as stress affects us day by day. People usually refresh themselves during the specific time like weekends,or summer vacation. >> People usually refresh themselves by having a dedicated time to do such like weekends or the summer vacation. It\'s okay,but it will be better for people to get out of a stressful situation whenever they confront it. >> Correct

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