HW 3.26

2026-03-27 · 첨삭 강사 Donna

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I don\'t eat any food to stay healthy. Maybe I have bad eating habits. I know I should take three important nutrients like proteins, carbohydes, and fats, but it\'s difficult to keep taking those. I always come back home at night around 11pm, so it\'s also difficult to cook something. Cooking and washing dishes is so annoying, so I skip cooking. I\'m continuing to drink soy milk to take some protein every morning. But there is a few protein. I\'ve got to buy a protein powder, because it\'s so convenient and has abundant protein.

강사 첨삭

Good day, [이름] [이름]!

Now that you are young, eating various food will maximize your potential for more growth and development. As you grow older, you will mature and so is your palate.

For now, continue choosing healthy food for your future healthy self.

There are grammar points you need to rectify below. Please study them well. Well done as always.

See you next week.

-T. Donna~

>>> I don\'t eat any special food to stay healthy. Maybe I have bad eating habits. I know I should take three important nutrients like proteins, carbohydrates, and fats, but it\'s difficult to keep taking those. I always come back home at night around 11pm, so it\'s also difficult to cook something. Cooking and washing dishes is so annoying, so I skip cooking.

I\'m continuing to drink soy milk to take some protein every morning. But there is a few protein.

>>> I\'m continuing to drink soy milk to take some protein every morning. But there are a few protein.

I\'ve got to buy a protein powder, because it\'s so convenient and has abundant protein.

>>> I\'ve got to buy a protein powder because it\'s so convenient and has abundant protein. Correct! Very good sentence!

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