HW 3.3
학생이 쓴 원문
Learning a language takes many time, so it needs to plan what should I first.
For me, it\'s to try the exam such like toeic, jlpt, and so on.
After finishing these exams, I can know more about grammar. Next, I start trying to speak this language to people who also saying the same language. To do this, I can participate in culture exchange events and go to the academic school.
When I participated in Japan-Korea exchange events on my campus first, I can\'t understand any words that native speakers say. I was so embarrassed, because I had the Japanese license at the time. But it gives me motivation and I started to make chances to speak native people.
After this, I could make good relationship from Japanese people in my university, and I got good at speaking Japanese.
강사 첨삭
Hi there, [이름] [이름]!
Truly, speaking another language is learning a new culture on its own. After all, the syntax or arrangements of the words, the vocabulary, and the rhythm will all be totally new.
I am proud of your multi-cultural immersion. It will be very beneficial for your career. Speak to more foreigners and you can be an international man ready for your profession.
If it is Japanese that you love, you will be able to speak it with ease and motivation.
Please compare the sentences that need some recasting. You did a very satisfactory work here.
See you.
-T. Donna~
For me, it\'s to try the exam such like toeic, jlpt, and so on.
>>> Learning a language takes a lot of time, so it needs to plan what should I do first.
For me, it\'s to try the exam such like TOEIC, JLPT, and so on.
After finishing these exams, I can know more about grammar. Next, I start trying to speak this language to people who also saying the same language. To do this, I can participate in culture exchange events and go to the academic school.
For me, it\'s to try the exam such like TOEIC, JLPT, and so on.
After finishing these exams, I can know more about grammar. Next, I start trying to speak this language to people who also saying the same language. To do this, I can participate in culture exchange events and go to the academic school.
>>> After finishing these exams, I can know more about grammar. Next, I start trying to speak this language to people who also speak the same language. To do this, I can participate in culture exchange events and go to the academic schools.
When I participated in Japan-Korea exchange events on my campus first, I can\'t understand any words that native speakers say. I was so embarrassed, because I had the Japanese license at the time. But it gives me motivation and I started to make chances to speak native people.
After this, I could make good relationship from Japanese people in my university, and I got good at speaking Japanese.
When I participated in Japan-Korea exchange events on my campus first, I can\'t understand any words that native speakers say. I was so embarrassed, because I had the Japanese license at the time. But it gives me motivation and I started to make chances to speak native people.
After this, I could make good relationship from Japanese people in my university, and I got good at speaking Japanese.
>>> When I participated in Japan-Korea exchange events in my campus for the first time, I can\'t understand any words that native speakers say. I was so embarrassed, because I had the Japanese license at the time. But it gives me motivation and I started to make chances to speak to native people.
After this, I could make good relationships with Japanese people in my university, and I got better at speaking Japanese.파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.