HW 3.4
학생이 쓴 원문
If I\'m good at speaking in English, I\'ll study Chinese. There are so many people in China, so I can talk with a lot of people in the world. Also, I have some friends from China and Taiwan, so I want to talk with them in their languages.
I enjoyed watching the Hong Kong\'s movie, so it\'s the another reason why I want to learn Chinese. I heard that Hong Kong doesn\'t use Mandarin, they use Cantoness, and they don\'t use simple kan-ji. So, If I\'m good at Chinese, I\'m gonna study Cantoness. It\'s my goal.
Actually, I tried to study Spanish three years ago, but I give up this, because it makes me hard to read English. They use same alphabet but it\'s kind of different. I was really confused of this.
강사 첨삭
Good afternoon, [이름] [이름]!
I am not surprised that you turned in your composition this early. After all, you have a lot of things to accomplish and a room to fix. Take things one step at a time.
Cantonese uses 6-9 distinct tones. I think there is nothing you can learn if you focus and simply speak the language. Like any other skill, speaking a language comes with a lot of practice. If you do not speak it, you will lose it.
The more exposure you get with the language, the faster and better you become.
Read and understand the underlined parts of your sentences with suggestions. You did a good job.
See you tomorrow.
-T. Donna~
>>> Correct! Very good sentences!
I enjoyed watching the Hong Kong\'s movie, so it\'s the another reason why I want to learn Chinese. I heard that Hong Kong doesn\'t use Mandarin, they use Cantoness, and they don\'t use simple kan-ji. So, If I\'m good at Chinese, I\'m gonna study Cantoness. It\'s my goal.
I enjoyed watching the Hong Kong\'s movie, so it\'s the another reason why I want to learn Chinese. I heard that Hong Kong doesn\'t use Mandarin, they use Cantoness, and they don\'t use simple kan-ji. So, If I\'m good at Chinese, I\'m gonna study Cantoness. It\'s my goal.
>>> I enjoyed watching Hong Kong\'s movies, so it\'s another reason why I want to learn Chinese. I heard that Hong Kong doesn\'t use Mandarin, they use Cantonese, and they don\'t use simple kan-ji. So, If I\'m good at Chinese, I\'m gonna study Cantonese. It\'s my goal.
Actually, I tried to study Spanish three years ago, but I give up this, because it makes me hard to read English. They use same alphabet but it\'s kind of different. I was really confused of this.
Actually, I tried to study Spanish three years ago, but I give up this, because it makes me hard to read English. They use same alphabet but it\'s kind of different. I was really confused of this.
>>> Actually, I tried to study Spanish three years ago, but I gave up because it makes me hard to read English. They use the same alphabet but it\'s kind of different. I was really confused of this.
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