HW 3.6
학생이 쓴 원문
My favorite art work is drawing anime character. It’s difficult for drawing new one from nothing, so I enjoy drawing something drawn. I recently do this using ipad, because it’s so easy to retouch.
I like listening to J-POP and it makes me study Japanese hardly. There are a few Japanese song at Koraoke in Korea, so I’m so sad.
강사 첨삭
Good day, [이름] [이름]!
Art enhances our lives by enjoying a certain piece if not simply belting out a song that we resonate with. Technology can play a role in supporting our tasks and this is not necessarily a negative thing.
Via technology, a karaoke song is easily accessible via YouTube. So, do not feel bad about Japanese Karaoke. You can connect your phone to the TV and sing your favorite song.
You did well here on this composition. Study my grammar suggestions with the intention of not committing the same mistakes.
See you.
-T. Donna~
>>> My favorite art work is drawing anime characters. It’s difficult to draw new ones from nothing, so I enjoy drawing something illustrated. I recently do this using an iPad, because it’s so easy to retouch.
I like listening to J-POP and it makes me study Japanese hardly. There are a few Japanese song at Koraoke in Korea, so I’m so sad.
I like listening to J-POP and it makes me study Japanese hardly. There are a few Japanese song at Koraoke in Korea, so I’m so sad.
>>> I like listening to J-POP and it makes me study Japanese well. There are a few Japanese song at the Koraoke in Korea, so I’m so sad.
파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.