HW 3.9
학생이 쓴 원문
It\'s too hard to think of my best art I\'ve made. I think there are nothing good enough to say the best. But I have some drawings that I like. They are paintings on an iPad. They are characters from my favorite anime, Inuyasha. This is set in old Japan. I like East Asia\'s historical culture like Cung-fu and Samurai, so I really like this anime.
When I drew this, I was about to enjoy drawing on an iPad. After I have a pain on my neck, I don\'t do this.
강사 첨삭
Hello there, [이름] [이름]!
Your art truly captures your love for Japanese culture. Inuyasha is a modern high-school girl transported back in time to feudal Japan, according to an online source.
If I compare the original illustration to yours, they are at par of each other.
Continue honing your art if you could manage your time.
Visit the grammar suggestions made here on your composition and analyze they patterns. Overall, good job.
See you.
-T. Donna~
>>> It\'s too hard to think of the best art I\'ve made. I think there is nothing good enough to say the best. But I have some drawings that I like. They are paintings on an iPad. They are characters from my favorite anime, Inuyasha. This is set in old Japan. I like East Asia\'s historical culture like Kung Fu and Samurai, so I really like this anime.
When I drew this, I was about to enjoy drawing on an iPad. After I have a pain on my neck, I don\'t do this.
>>> When I drew this, I was about to enjoy drawing on an iPad. After I have a pain on my neck, I didn\'t continue.
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