hw-3 end
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름]! ^_^
Here\'s the final part.
Thanks for writing this.
I hope Ted will have a happy ending too. ^_^v
See you in class tomorrow.
~Teacher Charry :*
Other people said she is crazy.
>> CORRECT!
She was often nervous and very sensitive since then, even though when she is ok.
>> She was often nervous and very sensitive since then, even though when she was ok.
She lost her fortune and sold a house for her medicine.
>> She lost her fortune and sold her house for her medicine.
At first she used sleeping pills to sleep but she misused them she had them too much.
>> At first she used sleeping pills to sleep but she misused them and had too much of them.
The doctor said she is suffering Alzheimer.
>> The doctor said she is suffering from Alzheimer\'s disease.
The old lady\'s name was Moora but after loosing her memory she became Rose.
>> CORRECT!
Rose was worried about her sickness so she tried to take Ted to the orphanage.
>> CORRECT!
However, Ted said no and he kept next to Rose.
>> However, Ted said no and he stayed next to Rose.
As her sickness is getting worse, Rose went to the street she didn\'t go back to her dinzy and small room.
>> As her sickness worsened, Rose went to the street and didn\'t go back to her dingy and small room.
Ted has been next to her.
>> Ted had been next to her.
They slept together and enjoyed meal together there.
>> They slept together and enjoyed a meal together there.
They became the homeless fianlly but when someone came close to Ted, she hit them and get them away.
>> They finally became homeless but when someone came close to Ted, she hit them and drove them away.
She did her best to protect Ted even when she was crazy.
>> CORRECT!
One day, young man came there and asked him \"Your grand mother\'s name is Moora?\"
>> One day, a young man came there and asked him, \"Your grand mother\'s name is Moora?\"
Ted said \"No\".
>> Ted said, \"No\".
\'The man looks nice and kind...\' Ted thought so.
>> \'The man looks nice and kind.\' Ted thought to himself.
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