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2013-05-07 · 첨삭 강사 Sheela

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Many people have a close relationship with their pets. These people treat their birds, cats, or other animals as members of their family. In your opinion, are such relationships good? Why or why not? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer I agree with that is good about we thinking our pet to our family members. Because it will help you to feel that you are having more famliy members.

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You have a simple but good answer. I wish that all people in world treat their pets and other animals very well. I am so sad that there are so many people who do bad things to this innocent animals. We should really be incharge in taking good care of them. Thank you! t.Jeny Many people have a close relationship with their pets. These people treat their birds, cats, or other animals as members of their family. In your opinion, are such relationships good? Why or why not? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answerI agree with that is good about we thinking our pet to our family members. >> I agree that it is good to treat our pet like a member of our family.Because it will help you to feel that you are having more famliy members. >>Because it will help you feel that you have more family members.

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