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2013-05-09 · 첨삭 강사 Verna

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Essay: What do you worry about? Describe something that worries you. Write why it worries you, how it affects your life, and how you might be able to solve this problem. As a student preparing for a job I am worring about my futures. Ever since I got into a college, I thought I have prepared well for my future life. I set my goal when I was in freashman, and sicne then I have focused my studing on the goal. But thesedays, I feel like i am not the level that i thought i would be, and that makes me disturbing. Whenever i looked back my life, i always regret not doing my best in every moment of my life. So, to solve the problem, first thing that i have to do is doing my best in every moment wheather they are important or not. It's been about a month since i decided to do that, and i feel changes around me. I started to get good reputation from other people and produce good results in my job. So next thing i have to do is to keep this in mind and never to forget.

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Hi!Thanks a lot for sending this in.^^I do appreciate all the efforts that you put in accomplishing all your works.You are quite extraordinary!I am so happy to be your teacher.^^Enjoy your day and let us talk again in our next class! Essay: What do you worry about? Describe something that worries you. Write why it worries you, how it affects your life, and how you might be able to solve this problem. As a student preparing for a job I am worring about my futures. >>Correct [...I am worried about my future.]^^ Ever since I got into a college, I thought I have prepared well for my future life. >>Ever since I got into college, I thought I have prepared well for my future life. I set my goal when I was in freashman, and sicne then I have focused my studing on the goal. >>I set my goal when I was in freshman and since then, I have focused on studying towards my goal. But thesedays, I feel like i am not the level that i thought i would be, and that makes me disturbing. >>But these days, I feel like I am not in the level I thought I would be and this disturbs me. Whenever i looked back my life, i always regret not doing my best in every moment of my life. >>Whenever I look back, I always regret not doing my best in every moment of my life. So, to solve the problem, first thing that i have to do is doing my best in every moment wheather they are important or not. >>So, to solve the problem, first thing that I have to do is do my best in every moment whether they are important or not. It\'s been about a month since i decided to do that, and i feel changes around me. >>Correct [capitalization: I] I started to get good reputation from other people and produce good results in my job. >>Correct! So next thing i have to do is to keep this in mind and never to forget. >>So next thing that I have to do is to keep this in mind and make sure that I don\'t forget it.^^

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