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1) does not tidy up / won't help 2) don't play / will not 3) eat / will not lose 4) don't make / will not love 5) dont' hurry / will not catch I did a composition, and I'd like you to fix it. This week we have a special guest, a famous moder dancer from china Jin. Not only for her name but reputation she is a star. Jin was a son of an army officer and a translator. When he was a child, he excelled in dance so he entered ABC institute as the youngest student ever. He went to America to study with an arts scholarship for the first time as a chinses dancer, and it became a big turning point to his career and himself. Jin often considered himself as a woman rather than a man, and underwent a sex change surgery in 1995. It was a big step in conservative socitey like china. As a professional dancer, Jin is continuously developing modern dance in Europe and here China.

Hello there!

Thank you for doing your homework and composition.

Great job!

You know how to organize your thoughts. Just be careful with some of your tenses.

But overall, you did a good job!

Keep it up!

-teacher Kathy-

1) does not tidy up / won\'t help

>> If Tom does not tidy up his room, Victoria will not help him with the muffins.

2) don\'t play / will not

>> Correct.

3) eat / will not lose

>> Correct.

4) don\'t make / will not love

>> Correct.

5) dont\' hurry / will not catch
>> Correct.
I did a composition, and I\'d like you to fix it.
>> Correct.

 This week we have a special guest, a famous modern dancer from china Jin. 

>>This week we\'re going to have a special guest, a famous modern dancer from china and his name is Jin. 

Not only for her name but reputation she is a star.

>> He has a good reputation and is also a popular star.

Jin was a son of an army officer and a translator.

>> Correct.

When he was a child, he excelled in dance so he entered ABC institute as the youngest student ever.

>>  When he was a child, he excelled in dancing so he entered ABC institute and became the youngest student ever.

He went to America to study with an arts scholarship for the first time as a chinses dancer, and it became a big turning point to his career and himself.

>> For the first time, he went to America to study because he was granted an arts scholarship as a Chinese dancer, and it became a big turning point in his career and himself.

Jin often considered himself as a woman rather than a man, and underwent a sex change surgery in 1995.

>> Correct.

It was a big step in conservative socitey like china.

>> It was a big step in a conservative society like china.

As a professional dancer, Jin is continuously developing modern dance in Europe and here China.

>>  As a professional dancer, Jin is continuously developing modern dance in Europe and here in China.