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As you already know, Our parents and we have completely different situation like envioroments, schools and other stuffs. So there is a difference of standard. Besides Adults and adolescents have their own unique emotions and feelings about cloths. So the parents and their offsprings can not help arguing about buying their cloths.
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Hello [이름]^^
Good evening! Good job in this writing. I am happy that you had time to check this out though I know you are always busy doing things at school.
I totally agree with you, that there are really instances that parents and their children can\'t agree in some instances just like of what you wrote in here.
Thanks for expressing your thoughts and thumbs up on this!! Keep it up and see you.
Teacher Liza
As you already know, Our parents and we have completely different situation like envioroments, schools and other stuffs.
>>Better: As I told you earlier, our parents and we have completely different preferences when it comes to environment, school and other stuffs.
So there is a difference of standard.
>>Better: The standards of both parties are totally different.
Besides Adults and adolescents have their own unique emotions and feelings about cloths.
>>Correct
>>Better: Besides adults and adolelescents have their own taste of preference when it comes to clothings.
So the parents and their offsprings can not help arguing about buying their cloths.
>>Correct
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