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2013-07-22 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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 I went to an airport at 6:00 AM yesterday. I had to catch the flight to Paris. The lines at an airport were very long, so I had to wait a long time. Once the plane took off, I tried to get some sleep but I couldn't. Then I ate a pretty good meal, a rare occurrence on airplanes! Later, I spoke to one of the flight  attendants for a while. She was pretty. She told me that the pilot of the airplane was French. I managed to fall asleep for about an hour. After I woke up, I felt refreshed. I ordered the drink, then another. Generally, it was a pretty smooth flight.

강사 첨삭

Hi there Miss. [Name]! Thank you for doing your homework! I really appreciate your effort in studying English. Keep up the good attitude. You did a good job! Please go over the corrections I provided for you, if you have any questions, feel free to ask me in class! I will be glad to answer. See you! Take Care! Have a nice day! Teacher Nina  I went to an airport at 6:00 AM yesterday. >> THE I had to catch the flight to Paris. >> A The lines at an airport were very long, so I had to wait a long time. >> THE Correct! Once the plane took off, I tried to get some sleep but I couldn\'t. >> Correct! Then I ate a pretty good meal, a rare occurrence on airplanes! >> Correct! Correct! Later, I spoke to one of the flight  attendants for a while. >> Correct! Correct! She was pretty. She told me that the pilot of the airplane was French. >> Correct! Correct! I managed to fall asleep for about an hour. >> Correct! After I woke up, I felt refreshed. I ordered the drink, then another. >> A Generally, it was a pretty smooth flight. >> Correct!

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