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2013-09-12 · 첨삭 강사 Jane

학생이 쓴 원문

Before I do homework, I want to say about your feedback. 5. The baby will be born with high disability. >> There's high possibility that the baby will be born with disability. What I said is "If you have a child, that child will be born with high probability of disabled." Sometimes you worte what I didn't say. I just wanted to mention. 1. Nobody can fool me. I'm never ___ in. (taking) giving taken given 2. It has been five years since I last ___ French. spoke (have been speaking) have spoken was speaking Isn't it wrong to have "last"? 3. I can sell you some bananas but only ___ . a little little (a few) few 4. His job was so tiring that he felt absolutely ___ . (sharpened) scrabbled shattered scattered 5. I really regretted my mistake. It was one that I ___ . (had not to make) ought not to have made mustn't make ought not to be making

강사 첨삭

Hi there, Ms. [이름]! Thank you for your composition. Thank you for writing the sentence you mentioned in the class as well. I\'m sorry if I don\'t get exactly what you mean sometimes. It\'s just that sometimes your voice is low so it\'s quite difficult for me to catch up your exact words. I hope you understand. Take care and have a nice day! T. JanE ^^ Before I do homework, I want to say about your feedback.>> Before I do the homework, I want to say something about your feedback. 5. The baby will be born with high disability.>> There\'s high possibility that the baby will be born with disability.>> Correct What I said is \"If you have a child, that child will be born with high probability of disabled.\">> What I said was, \"If you are pregnant, that child will be born with high probability of disability.\" Sometimes you worte what I didn\'t say. >> There were times when you wrote what I didn\'t say. I just wanted to mention.>> Correct 1. Nobody can fool me. I\'m never ___ in.(taking) giving taken given>> Nobody can fool me. I\'m never _taken_ in.2. It has been five years since I last ___ French.spoke (have been speaking) have spoken was speaking>> It has been five years since I last _spoke_ French.Isn\'t it wrong to have \"last\"?>> Correct 3. I can sell you some bananas but only ___ .a little little (a few) few>> Correct 4. His job was so tiring that he felt absolutely ___ .(sharpened) scrabbled shattered scattered>> His job was so tiring that he felt absolutely _shattered_ .5. I really regretted my mistake. It was one that I ___ .(had not to make) ought not to have made mustn\'t make ought not to be making >> I really regretted my mistake. It was one that I _ought not to have made_ .  

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