HW 4.30
학생이 쓴 원문
The best apology I have made is that I apologized to my English teacher when I was in high school. I was late for hers class and the class\'s rule is to sing if we are late. At that time, I was kind of shamed of singing in front of someone, so I refused to sing. If I was gentle and had a manner, she would give alternatives, but I refused it while feeling annoyed. But, she was so kind and she just let me do whatever I wanted. I felt guilty then, so I went to her two hours later, and I apologized for my rude. And she forgave me and I also sang in my class. I\'m sure that I could keep my relationship with my teacher because of fast and honest apology.
강사 첨삭
Hi there, [이름] [이름]!
Apologizing instantly only means the action was not intentional. Moreover, it signals good manners and character integrity of the one saying \"sorry\". As people age, it becomes harder to say it since they build their pride and do not want to commit mistakes. However, it is a word we may say many times in our lives and demands actions to prove it.
Thus, apologize when necessary. There are several ways to do it without hurting one\'s pride. I will teach you some ways in class later.
Congratulations for a well-composed essay! Please look at a couple of underlined words for their correct grammar structure. Well done!
See you.
-T. Donna~
>>> The best apology I have made is that I apologized to my English teacher when I was in high school. I was late for hers class and the class\'s rule is to sing if we are late. At that time, I was kind of ashamed of singing in front of someone, so I refused to sing. If I was gentle and had a manner, she would give alternatives, but I refused it while feeling annoyed. But, she was so kind and she just let me do whatever I wanted. Very good sentences!
I felt guilty then, so I went to her two hours later, and I apologized for my rude. And she forgave me and I also sang in my class. I\'m sure that I could keep my relationship with my teacher because of fast and honest apology.
>>> I felt guilty then, so I went to her two hours later, and I apologized for my rudeness. She forgave me and I also sang in my class. I\'m sure that I could keep my relationship with my teacher because of the fast and the honest apology.
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