HW 4.6
학생이 쓴 원문
Most friends work oout at the gym. I heard that fitting and shaping their body are so fun and satisyfing. Seeing my body get muscle is so exciting. I also used to enjoy working out like weight training, but It\'s kind of boring for me.
I think swimming is the good way to cope with stresses. I heard that some professors love swimming when they are tired of their research. Swimming is also good to shape up the core of body. I used to swim in elementary school, and I hope to learn swimming again, because I totally forgot how to swim and even float on the water. And I want to lost my weight from this.
강사 첨삭
Good day, [이름] [이름]!
Staying fit and healthy is everybody\'s obligation and business. Our body is our home so we cannot be uncomfortable knowing that we are too heavy and so sick because of our food intake and lifestyle.
If most of your friends build their muscles, build yours as well. Do not force yourself too much, however. A well-balance life is still the best.
Unlike running or cycling, swimming engages almost every major muscle group, including your arms, legs, core, and back. Go swim soon.
Review your spelling, single or plural noun forms, and the use of \"the\". Overall, you did well.
See you.
-T. Donna~
>>> Most friends work out at the gym. I heard that being fit and shaping their body are so fun and satisfying. Seeing my body get muscle is so exciting. I also used to enjoy working out like weight training, but It\'s kind of boring for me.
I think swimming is the good way to cope with stresses. I heard that some professors love swimming when they are tired of their research. Swimming is also good to shape up the core of body. I used to swim in elementary school, and I hope to learn swimming again, because I totally forgot how to swim and even float on the water. And I want to lost my weight from this.
>>> I think swimming is a good way to cope with stress. I heard that some professors love swimming when they are tired of their research. Swimming is also good to shape up the core of the body. I used to swim in the elementary school, and I hope to learn swimming again, because I totally forgot how to swim and even float on the water. Also, I want to lose weight from this.
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