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2014-01-03 · 첨삭 강사 Kristel

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What's something that you are looking forward to for the year 2014? =>Welcoming the 2014, I considered my new year plan as usual. First thing is about my work. I got my new job late of the last year, so I need time to adopt it and be proficient to get small achievements in this year. For this goal, of course, English is one of the keys of it. Second is, maybe, about health, not only strong body but including good shape and young skin. I think all those can be concluded to exercise. So saying to simply, I'll go to the gym regularly.

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Hello there sweetie!! I really love how you play with your expressions and the structures of your sentences. It\'s nice that you are exploring ways on how to express your thoughts better than sticking to the traditional way. Two thumbs up to that for you. ^^ Anyway, please check some minor corrections I made for you. Have a burning Friday and a blissful weekend ahead! T.Kristel- What\'s something that you are looking forward to for the year 2014?=>Welcoming the 2014, I considered my new year plan as usual. >> To welcome 2014, I considered my New Year plan as usual.First thing is about my work. I got my new job late of the last year, so I need time to adopt it and be proficient to get small achievements in this year. >> CORRECT!! I got my new job late last year, so I need time to adapt and be proficient in getting small achievements this year. For this goal, of course, English is one of the keys of it. >> CORRECT!! Second is, maybe, about health, not only strong body but including good shape and young skin. >> Second is, maybe, about health, not only to have a strong body but including a good shape and a young looking skin. I think all those can be concluded to exercise. So saying to simply, I\'ll go to the gym regularly. >> CORRECT!!  So saying it simply, I\'ll go to the gym regularly.  

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