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2014-01-06 · 첨삭 강사 Jane

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Hi Jane It is very long time to write my composition on this website. Now, the last year passes, my holiday ends The new year comes. So I am going to study English harder. Anyway happy new year! HOMEWORK FOR TODAY: 1 Hang on. I'm going to write that down as a reminder. 2 Well, luckily he gave me a hint. I needed something to jog my memory. 3 After the car accident, he suffered short-term memory loss but he's fine now. 4 This sounds odd but I've got a mental bolck about telephone numbers. 5 It was 1977. No, wait - my memory's playing tricks again. It was 1987.

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Hi there, Ms. [이름]! Thank you for your composition! I hope you can achieve your goals for this 2014. Stay positive and always believe in your ability to make your dreams come true. You can do it! Take care and see you in class! T. JanE ^^ Hi Jane>> Correct It is very long time to write my composition on this website.>> It\'s been a very long time since the last time I wrote a composition on this website. Now, the last year passes, my holiday ends>> My holiday ends with the closing of the previous year. The new year comes.>> Correct So I am going to study English harder.>> Correct Anyway happy new year!>> Correct HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:1 Hang on. I\'m going to write that down as a reminder.>> Correct 2 Well, luckily he gave me a hint. I needed something to jog my memory.>> Correct 3 After the car accident, he suffered short-term memory loss but he\'s fine now.>> Correct 4 This sounds odd but I\'ve got a mental block about telephone numbers.>> Correct 5 It was 1977. No, wait - my memory\'s playing tricks again. It was 1987. >> Correct  

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