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Hello there!
A nice morning^^
I think you are in a dilemma since you don\'t have any idea what you want to do in the future.
Why don\'t you have some time alone and reflect on this.
What are your interest? What are the things you love to do?
What are the things you do that makes you happy?
Q.What is something that you want to change in 2014?
A.
Um... I want to change my personality.
>>Correct!
I am a very lazy person now.
>>Correct!
I usually postpone the things that i have to do to the end of a day.
>>I usually post[one the things I have to do until the end of the day.
It causes another bad habit that I sleep so late and wake up late morning.
>>It causes another bad habit. I sleep so late and wake up late in the morning.
I have thought this is the worst habit among my many bad habits.
Since I came back home 2 month ago, I am getting lazier day by day.
>>Correct!
I don\'k know the reason why I am exactly.
>>I don\'t know the reason why exactly.
I guess.. It is because I don\'t know what I want to do in the futhre.
The first thing I have to do is to find what I really want to do.
>>Correct!I hope I have the best time in this year.
>>I hope I have the best time this year.
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