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I have made some corrections and I rephrased some sentences.
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Q.What is one thing you have learned from your past? What would you do differently if you could
I have leaerned from the past I spent that my past makes my present and my future.
>>I have learned that my past makes my present and my future.
When I look back myself, I haven\'t achieved anything until now.
>>When I look back, I haven\'t achieved anything until now.
I have nothing special.
>>Correct!
It means I have wasted my time so much.
>>It means I have wasted so much time.
The time I have wasted might be the best time to do something.
>>The time I have wasted would have been the best time I did something.
I have to realize that time never returns.
So I will make my future different by spending my time preciously.
>>Correct!
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