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2014-01-07 · 첨삭 강사 Jane

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I watched a movie with my boyfreind. Its title is 'The lawyer' and it is about the previous president of Korea, No Mu Hyun. Of course, it is a fiction, but based on the fact. When he was a lawyer, he was the (almost?) only one who didn't go to the university of all other lawyers. He was ignored from other co-workers, and at first he was concentrated on earning lots of money. However, by something unrighteous, he was changed to the person who fought for justice. The movie is about this story and it would be a turning point in his life. In reality, after retirement, he suicided himself. Although there are many opinions about his death, I believe he chose the death for protecting his family from the pressure with the present government. Anyway it is very sad to happen like this. 1. Right now, my mother is cooking dinner in the kitchen. 2. Catherine went to the hospital to visit her cousin. 3. We were with them just last night. 4. Are you taking medicine for your cold? 5. My father is stroner than me.

강사 첨삭

Hi there, Ms. [이름]! Thank you for your composition. I\'ve heard about this movie from other students several times. I think it\'s really a blockbuster in your country. I hope to see it, too. I am curious about the life of the late president of your country. I am also curious why they made this movie about him. Maybe you can tell me more about it during the class. Take care and talk to you later! T. JanE ^^ I watched a movie with my boyfriend.>> Correct Its title is \'The Lawyer\' and it is about the previous president of Korea, No Mu Hyun. >> Correct Of course, it is a fiction, but based on the fact.>> Of course it is fiction, but some scenes are based on true story. When he was a lawyer, he was the (almost?) only one who didn\'t go to the university of all other lawyers. >> When he was a lawyer, he was the only one who almost didn\'t go to the university of all the lawyers. He was ignored from other co-workers, and at first he was concentrated on earning lots of money. >> He was ignored by his co-workers, and at first he was concentrated on earning lots of money. However, by something unrighteous, he was changed to the person who fought for justice. >> However, due to something unrighteous, he changed into a person who fought for justice. The movie is about this story and it would be a turning point in his life.>> The movie is about this story and it was the turning point of his life. In reality, after retirement, he suicided himself. >> In reality, after retirement, he committed suicide. Although there are many opinions about his death, I believe he chose the death for protecting his family from the pressure with the present government.>> Although there are many different opinions about his death, he chose to die to protect his family from the pressure of the present government. Anyway it is very sad to happen like this.>> Anyway, it was a very sad point in his life.1. Right now, my mother is cooking dinner in the kitchen.>> Correct 2. Catherine went to the hospital to visit her cousin.>> Correct 3. We were with them just last night.>> Correct 4. Are you taking medicine for your cold?>> Correct 5. My father is stronger than me. >> Correct

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