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2014-01-07 · 첨삭 강사 Jane

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I have a friend who lives in Australia with her husband and baby. When they were not getting married, they went there on working holiday. After that, they decided to live there together and they did it actually. There, the husband has part-time jobs in the restaurants or hotels. In Australia, because the government gives quite high pay per an hour to the worker, they don't go through trouble in money, but it seems so unstable to me. Whenever I talk on the phone with her, she told me that she was very satisfied with her lifestyle. She spends much time with her famaily. Their most important value in their life is enjoying themselves together, although they can't make lots of money or can't get any good honor in life. It is not that easy to live like that. Most people try to get a better job or more money for their social success. Sometimes, I envy their courage life. But sometimes, I don't understand them. 1) This is a nice cat. It's much nicer than my friend's cat. 2) Here is Emily. She's six years old. Her brother is nine, so he is older than her. 3) This is a difficult exercise. But the exercise with an asterisk (*) is the most difficult exercise on the worksheet. 4) He has an interesting hobby, but my sister has the most interesting hobby in the world. 5) In the last holidays I read a good book, but father gave me an even better one last weekend.

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Hi there!   How is your day? I can\'t wait to hear it from you. You just get a perfect score!!!! Yeheey!!! I am too happy for you. I know you can do it. Thank you also for sharing something about your friend. I corrected some of your errors so hopefully you have the time to check it... See you again in our class!! Goodbye!!! Teacher Jane   I have a friend who lives in Australia with her husband and baby. >> I have a friend who lives in Australia with her husband and their baby.When they were not getting married, they went there on working holiday. >> When they were not married yet, they always go there during their working holidays.After that, they decided to live there together and they did it actually. >> After that, they decided to live and build a family there.There, the husband has part-time job in a restaurant or a hotel. >> There of, her husband get a part-time job in a restarant or hotel. In Australia, because the government gives quite high pay per an hour to the worker, >> In Australia, the government gives a quite high salary an hour to their workers. they don\'t go through trouble in money, but it seems so unstable to me. >> They don\'t have any trouble about money, but it seems unstable to me.Whenever I talk on the phone with her, she told me that she was very satisfied with her lifestyle.  >> Whenever I talk with her on the phone, she always told me that she is very satisfied with her life. She spends much time with her famaily. >> Correct ( She spends much time with her family. )Their most important value in their life is enjoying themselves together, although they can\'t make lots of money or can\'t get any good honor in life. >> Enjoying theirselves together eventhough they can\'t make a lot of money or doesn\'t have any good honor  is the most important thing in their life.It is not that easy to live like that. >> Correct Most people try to get a better job or more money for their social success. >> Most people try to get a better job or earn more money for their social success. Sometimes, I envy their courage life. >> Sometimes, I envy their bravery. But sometimes, I don\'t understand them.>> Correct1) This is a nice cat. It\'s much nicer than my friend\'s cat. >> Correct2) Here is Emily. She\'s six years old. Her brother is nine, so he is older than her. >> Correct3) This is a difficult exercise. But the exercise with an asterisk (*) is the most difficult exercise on the worksheet. >> Correct4) He has an interesting hobby, but my sister has the most interesting hobby in the world. >> Correct5) In the last holidays I read a good book, but father gave me an even better one last weekend. >> Correct

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