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2014-01-09 · 첨삭 강사 Kelly

학생이 쓴 원문

1. Why did he try to run out from home? It means that he wanted to run to the outside, when he was home. 2. I always run over old students of mine when I go to that cafeteria. It means that I pass by my old students, running, when I go to that cafeteria. 3. He runs after every pretty girl he sees at school. It means that he likes every pretty girl he sees at school and he follows them, running after them 4. Yesterday I ran into an old friend of mine at the supermarket. actually, I am not sure whether it is right or not. 5. He ran off with his best friend's girlfriend actually, I am not sure whether it is right or not. It is not that easy to choose the answer. Have you heard of the system, ‘working holiday’ ? The reason that I ask this to you is in one of my last compositions. It is about my friend who lives in Australia. Before they getting married, they used the system, ‘working holiday’ together. Due to this, they could stay in Australia in a year, working and making money. I have a question. When I want to use the expression, I am (doing or using or expriencing) in Australia with working holiday, how can I tell? I think that my sentence is wrong.

강사 첨삭

Hi there^^

Thank you for doing your homework^^

I made some corrections and I hope I was able to meet all your points.

If you have some questions, just ask me in our class.

Regarding your question,

I think you should say \" I am working in Australia through working holiday visa.\"

OR: You can also say, \"I have a working holiday visa in Australia.\"

Anyway, see you in class^^

Have a great day and take care^^

~T.Jane

1. Why did he try to run out from home?

>>c. away

It means that he wanted to run to the outside, when he was home.

>>It means that he wanted to run outside, when he\'s at home. 

2. I always run over old students of mine when I go to that cafeteria.

>>b. across

It means that I pass by my old students, running, when I go to that cafeteria.

>>It means that he/she bump into his/her old student when she/he goes to the cafeteria.

3. He runs after every pretty girl he sees at school.

>>CORRECT^^

It means that he likes every pretty girl he sees at school and he follows them, running after them

>>It means that he likes every pretty girl he sees at school and follows them.  

4. Yesterday I ran into an old friend of mine at the supermarket.

>>CORRECT^^

actually, I am not sure whether it is right or not.

>>Actually, I\'m not sure whether it\'s right or wrong.

5. He ran off with his best friend\'s girlfriend

>>CORRECT^^

actually, I am not sure whether it is right or not.

>>Actually, I\'m not sure whether it\'s right or wrong.

It is not that easy to choose the answer.
>>CORRECT^^

Have you heard of the system, ‘working holiday’ ?

>>Have you heard about the working holiday system?

The reason that I ask this to you is in one of my last compositions.

>>The reason I asked you this is because of my composition last time.

It is about my friend who lives in Australia.

>>CORRECT^^

Before they getting married, they used the system, ‘working holiday’ together.

>>Before they got married, they used working holiday system together.

>>Before they got married, they used working holiday visa together.

Due to this, they could stay in Australia in a year, working and making money.

>>Because of this, they can stay in Australia for a year, working and earning money.

I have a question.

>>CORRECT^^

When I want to use the expression, I am (doing or using or expriencing) in Australia with working holiday, how can I tell?

>>When I want to use the expression, I am working in Australia through working holiday visa. How can I tell?

I think that my sentence is wrong.

>>I think, my sentence is wrong.

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