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Hi there^^
Thank you for doing your homework^^
I made some corrections and I hope I was able to meet all your points.
If you have some questions, just ask me in our class.
Regarding your question,
I think you should say \"
I am working in Australia through working holiday visa.\"
OR: You can also say, \"I have a working holiday visa in Australia.\"
Anyway, see you in class^^
Have a great day and take care^^
~T.Jane
1. Why did he try to run out from home?
>>c. away
It means that he wanted to run to the outside, when he was home.
>>It means that he wanted to run outside, when he\'s at home.
2. I always run over old students of mine when I go to that cafeteria.
>>b. across
It means that I pass by my old students, running, when I go to that cafeteria.
>>It means that he/she bump into his/her old student when she/he goes to the cafeteria.
3. He runs after every pretty girl he sees at school.
>>CORRECT^^
It means that he likes every pretty girl he sees at school and he follows them, running after them
>>It means that he likes every pretty girl he sees at school and follows them.
4. Yesterday I ran into an old friend of mine at the supermarket.
>>CORRECT^^
actually, I am not sure whether it is right or not.
>>Actually, I\'m not sure whether it\'s right or wrong.
5. He ran off with his best friend\'s girlfriend
>>CORRECT^^
actually, I am not sure whether it is right or not.
>>Actually, I\'m not sure whether it\'s right or wrong.
>>CORRECT^^
Have you heard of the system, ‘working holiday’ ?
>>Have you heard about the working holiday system?
The reason that I ask this to you is in one of my last compositions.
>>The reason I asked you this is because of my composition last time.
It is about my friend who lives in Australia.
>>CORRECT^^
Before they getting married, they used the system, ‘working holiday’ together.
>>Before they got married, they used working holiday system together.
>>Before they got married, they used working holiday visa together.
Due to this, they could stay in Australia in a year, working and making money.
>>Because of this, they can stay in Australia for a year, working and earning money.
I have a question.
>>CORRECT^^
When I want to use the expression, I am (doing or using or expriencing) in Australia with working holiday, how can I tell?
>>When I want to use the expression, I am working in Australia through working holiday visa. How can I tell?
I think that my sentence is wrong.
>>I think, my sentence is wrong.
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