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2014-01-10 · 첨삭 강사 Jane

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I am a master of English education. I've already had the degree. But, Still, I am anxious about getting another one. It is not because I want to study more but to get the name value of a school. The graduated school that I went is in local. Actually, when I was studying there. the contents that I learned there are very helpful to me and also, the professors are so great. But, in Seoul,there is no one to know this school. If I work in local area, there is no problem. However, when I tell someone like my students' parents or boss in an academy about my school, I can't do act openly. I am worried about their feeling about my career. At the same time, I am not sure whether going to graduated school again is valuable or not. 1. It was raining cats and dogs when we got off the bus. B: It was raining really hard. 2. Ashley blacks out whenever she sees blood. C: She faints. 3. She should give him a taste of his own medicine. B: She should do to him what he did to her. 4. I've been feeling under the weather lately. D: I've been sick lately. 5. My bank account is in the red. C: My account is overdrawn, so I owe the bank money.

강사 첨삭

Hi there, Ms. [이름]! Thank you for your composition! I understand your anxiety. I guess it would help to go to another Graduate School in Seoul if you really want to build a career. This is an ugly truth. What I mean to say is that, discrimination really exists in the society and it comes in different kinds. It can be against gender, age, school, etc. I hope you\'ll be able to decide about the steps that you need for a better career. I wish you all the best! T. JanE ^^ I am a master of English education. >> Correct I\'ve already had the degree.>> I already have a degree. But, still, I am anxious about getting another one.>> Correct It is not because I want to study more but to get the name value of a school.>> It is not because I want to study more but I just want to get a degree in a school with a good name. The graduated school that I went is in local. >> The Graduate School that I attended in is in the local area. Actually, when I was studying there. the contents that I learned there are very helpful to me and also, the professors are so great. >> Actually, when I was studying there, I learned many helpful things and the professors are so great. But, in Seoul,there is no one to know this school. >> But, in Seoul, no one knows this school. If I work in a local area, there is no problem. >> Correct However, when I tell someone like my students\' parents or boss in an academy about my school, I can\'t do act openly.>> However, when I tell someone, like my students\' parents or boss in an academy, about my school, I can\'t act openly. I am worried about their feeling about my career. >> I am worried about what they think about my career. At the same time, I am not sure whether going to graduated school again is valuable or not.>> At the same time, I am not sure whether going to Graduate School again is important or not.1. It was raining cats and dogs when we got off the bus. B: It was raining really hard.>> Correct 2. Ashley blacks out whenever she sees blood. C: She faints.>> Correct 3. She should give him a taste of his own medicine. B: She should do to him what he did to her.>> Correct 4. I\'ve been feeling under the weather lately. D: I\'ve been sick lately.>> Correct 5. My bank account is in the red. C: My account is overdrawn, so I owe the bank money. >> Correct  

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