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Last Friday, I visited my friend who got married three month ago. On Saturday, because her husband were supposed to go night work from 8pm to 9am, We could enjoy ourselves comfortably without worrying about him and I could sleep in her house. On Saturday, I had an appointment with my boyfriend at 3pm. However, we wanted to be together more because it had been a long time to see her, so I decided to stay with her and I said to my boyfriend that we would meet the next day and I am sorry to tell you this. At that time, my friend was glad about that situation. But soon, she worried about her husband and she wanted to go to him and have dinner with him. Even though her husband told her not to care about him and to enjoy your time with your friend, she thought whether it is ok or not. I didn’t understand her at all and I regretted my decision that I put off the appointment with my boyfriend. I felt that she didn’t care about me and didn’t think about my consideration about her and our meeting. After all, she decided to be with me more and we watched movie and had dinner and talked together. But it was true that I was so uncomfortable at that time.
1. She couldn't keep up the payments so she lost the house.
2. She likes to keep up with the latest fashions.
3. The doctor said that I have to keep off alcohol.
4. This spray will keep away the bugs.
5. She keeps on about him even though he has left.
강사 첨삭
Hi there, Ms. [이름]!
Thank you for your composition! You must have felt really awkward at that time. I understand that you felt bad because you thought your friend took your sacrifice for her for granted. However, I also understand how your friend felt that time. She was torn between you and her husband. In your case you had to choose between your friend and your boyfriend. It was easier for you to choose but the case is otherwise for your friend. Don\'t feel bad. Remember that she and her husband are still in a honeymoon period because they\'ve been married for only three months. I\'m sure it\'ll be easier for her to decide after a few years of marriage. Well, the good thing is, she chose to be with you at that time.
T. JanE ^^
Last Friday, I visited my friend who got married three month ago.
>> Last Friday, I visited my friend who got married three months ago.
On Saturday, because her husband were supposed to go night work from 8pm to 9am, We could enjoy ourselves comfortably without worrying about him and I could sleep in her house.
>> Last Saturday, because her husband went on a night shift from 8 pm to 9 am, we could enjoy ourselves comfortably without worrying about him, and I could sleep in her house.
On Saturday, I had an appointment with my boyfriend at 3pm.
>> Correct
>> Last Saturday, I had a date with my boyfriend at 3 pm.
However, we wanted to be together more because it had been a long time to see her, so I decided to stay with her and I said to my boyfriend that we would meet the next day and I am sorry to tell you this.
>> However, we wanted to be together more because we didn\'t see each other for a long time, so I decided to stay with her and I told my boyfriend that we would meet the next day and I apologized to him.
At that time, my friend was glad about that situation. >> Correct
But soon, she worried about her husband and she wanted to go to him and have dinner with him.
>> Correct
Even though her husband told her not to care about him and to enjoy your time with your friend, she thought whether it is ok or not. >> Even though her husband told her not to care about him and to enjoy her time with me, she doubted whether it was okay or not.
I didn’t understand her at all and I regretted my decision that I put off the appointment with my boyfriend.
>> I didn\'t understand her at all, and I regretted my decision that I put off my date with my boyfriend.
I felt that she didn’t care about me and didn’t think about my consideration about her and our meeting.
>> Correct
After all, she decided to be with me more and we watched movie and had dinner and talked together. >> Finally, she decided to be with me and we watched a movie, had dinner and talked to each other.
But it was true that I was so uncomfortable at that time. >> Correct 1. She couldn\'t keep up the payments so she lost the house.>> Correct
2. She likes to keep up with the latest fashions.>> Correct
3. The doctor said that I have to keep off alcohol.>> Correct
4. This spray will keep away the bugs.>> Correct
5. She keeps on about him even though he has left.
>> Correct
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