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학생이 쓴 원문
I have talked about her to you. I have a friend whose husband works on selling fake things like bags or shoes. Her husband goes to a business trip once a month to abroad. This month, he is supposed to go to Hongkong for a week. During this time, my friend wanted to go to Hongkong with me and another friend who I don’t know and I’ve just heard of. My friend thought that her friend and I would be close and like each other. Of course, we will enjoy ourselves without her husband and maybe, we will be able to have lunch or dinner once with him. Especially, in a strange place, it would be great. This plan seemed to be perfect. But On a second thought, it was a little burden for me to go abroad continually. I went to Thailand just few days ago, so this plan could be a big deal to me. Finally, we changed our plan. we decided to go to the Jeju island just us (just two of us).
When you need money, you can borrow from a bank, but be prepared to pay high interest. Banks don't lend money as a favor. They charge for the loan. Only friends may lend money as a favor. If you borrow money from a friend, be prepared to return the favor one day. Your friend may also ask you to lend him some money when he doesn't want to borrow from a bank. On that occasion, you either lend him money or you lose a friend.
강사 첨삭
Hi there, Ms. [이름]!
Thank you for your composition today! I envy you for having plans to travel again. I wish I could also travel so I can relax. However, I don\'t have long vacation, so I can\'t travel yet. Maybe I can make plans for Chuseok, but I am not yet sure where to go. I also have to consider my budget. Take care and see you in class!
T. JanE ^^
I have talked about her to you.
>> Correct
I have a friend whose husband works on selling fake things like bags or shoes.
>> I have a friend whose husband sells imitations of branded bags or shoes.
Her husband goes to a business trip once a month to abroad. >> Her husband goes on a business trip abroad once a month.
This month, he is supposed to go to Hongkong for a week.
>> Correct
During this time, my friend wanted to go to Hongkong with me and another friend who I don’t know and I’ve just heard of.
>> Correct
My friend thought that her friend and I would be close and like each other.
>> My friend thought that her friend and I would be close and would like each other.
Of course, we will enjoy ourselves without her husband and maybe, we will be able to have lunch or dinner once with him. >> Correct
Especially, in a strange place, it would be great.
>> Correct
This plan seemed to be perfect.
>> Correct
But on a second thought, it was a little burden for me to go abroad continually.
>> Correct
I went to Thailand just few days ago, so this plan could be a big deal to me. >> Correct
Finally, we changed our plan.
>> Correct
we decided to go to the Jeju island just us (just two of us).>> We decided to go to Jeju Island and it will just be the two of us.When you need money, you can borrow from a bank, but be prepared to pay high interest. >> Correct
Banks don\'t lend money as a favor. They charge for the loan.
>> Correct
Only friends may lend money as a favor.
>> Correct
If you borrow money from a friend, be prepared to return the favor one day.
>> Correct
Your friend may also ask you to lend him some money when he doesn\'t want to borrow from a bank. >> Correct
On that occasion, you either lend him money or you lose a friend.
>> Correct
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