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학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi there! A wonderful Tuesday to you! :))
Thank you for dedicating some of your time in answering the homework for today. :)) I appreciate it and I will be more than happy to check it for you. :))
Your tradition is really beautiful. Doing such thing for your parents is such a wonderful thing. Making your parents happy by a small act is very heart-warming and would definitely make your parents happy during their special day. :)) I assume that your father was very happy during his birthday. :)) Na it was nice for you and your sister to a lot some of your money to save for his birthday. :))
Thank you for sharing this story to me and I hope that you and your sister will enjoy lunch tomorrow. :)) Have a great night. Talk to you soon. :))
T. Jane ^^,
Tomorrow is Wednesday.
>> CORRECT!
>> OR: It is Wednesday tomorrow.
It is normal weekday, but to me, it is no class day.
>> It is a normal day but for me, it is a class free day.
I am going to meet my sister and have lunch in a sea food restaurant.
>> CORRECT!
OR
>> I am going to meet my sister and we will have lunch in a seafood restaurant.
>> I am going to meet my sister and we will eat in a seafood restaurant for lunch.
After that, we’re going to go shopping and talk about anything related to us in a coffee place.
>> CORRECT!
OR
>> After that we\'re going shopping and talk about us in a coffee place.
The restaurant’s food is very expensive. But we can afford to it, because I have a membership card which has enough points to pay for it.
>> The food in the restaurant is very expensive but we can afford it becuase I have a membership card which has enough points to pay for it. (You can actually combine the two sentences.)
How? I have a behind story.
>> How? There is a story behind that.
Last year, My father became 61 years old.
>> Last year, my father turned 61 years old.
In Korea, we celebrate the age having a party or meeting with close relatives and friends and my relatives have a tradition that the sons or daughters prepare the event for their parents.
>> In Korea, when a person reaches 61 we celebrate his birthday by having a party or meeting with relatives and close friends. And there is also a tradition that the children will be the ones to prepare the event for their parents.
For it, My sister and I saved money little by little for a year.
>> For the birthday of our father, my sister and I saved for a year.
On my father’s birthday, we invited many people, got many presents, cut the cake in this restaurant and the invited people congratulated my father and blessed my family.
>> CORRECT!
OR
>> On my father\'s birthday we invited many people, got many presents, cut the cake in this restaurant and the guests congratulated my father and blessed my family.
Of course, I and my sister spent all the saved money for paying.
>> Of course, me and my sister spent all the money we saved in paying for the party.
Due to paying lots of money, the restaurant gave us some points that can be used on weekday lunch for one person.
>> The amount that we paid has a large amount so the restaurant gave us points that is equivalent with the amount that we paid and the points can be redeemed for paying the meal of one person.
Tomorrow, my sister has something to do outside the work place and I have no class. So it is the perfect time for us to use this chance to have lunch there.
>> CORRECT! (Or you can also combine the two sentences.)
OR:
>> Tomorrow, my sister has something to do outside the work place and I have no class soitis a perfect time for us the points and have lunch there.
That’s why I can go there and have lunch and I can’t wait eating the food.
>> That\'s why I can go there and have lunch and I can\'t wait to eat the food.
OR
>> That\'s why I can go there for lunch and taste the food again.
We met on a wet Friday in June.
>> CORRECT! (Or you can write the word \"the\" after the sentence to emphasize the word that was ommitted.)
2. Despite her hard work, she did not pass.
>> CORRECT! (Or you can write the word \"of\" after the sentence to emphasize the word that was ommitted.)
3. The meeting was postponed because the chairman was ill.
>> CORRECT! (Or you can write the word \"of\" after the sentence to emphasize the word that was ommitted.)
4. She married a friend of her brother\'s.
>> CORRECT! (Or you can write the word \"with\" after the sentence to emphasize the word that was ommitted.)
5. The party lasted all night.
>> CORRECT! (Or you can write the word \"the\" after the sentence to emphasize the word that was ommitted.)
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