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Hi there, Ms. [이름]!

Thank you for your composition! I really want to answer your question regarding gays, and actually I tried several times but something is terribly wrong with my computer that\'s why my replies to your composition didn\'t get through. I guess it would be better to talk about it in class. Take care and talk to you later!

T. JanE ^^

what do you think of \'gay\'?

>> What is your opinion about gays?

Korea has very a conservative view to them.

>> Korea has a very conservative view about them.

Few years ago, the man who was very a famous comedian came out.

>> Few years ago, a man, who was a very famous comedian, came out of the closet.

At that time, most Korean people was shocked and thought that he would be a person who had a kind of decease related with mental(psychic).

>> At that time, most Korean people were shocked and they thought that he was a person with mental illness.

He was fired at all tv programs he worked in.

>> Correct

All people blamed him.

>> Correct

He had to hide from the people.

>> He had to hide from people.

He started a business with restaurants in Itaewon.

>> He started a restaurant in Itaewon.

Itaewon is the place where many foreigners live and hang out.

>> Itaewon is a place where many foreigners live and hang out.

Maybe, Itaewon is much more comfortable place to him than other place in Korea.

>> Maybe, Itaewon is a much more comfortable place for him than other places in Korea.

Now, there is the hot place to young people and foreigners.

>> Now, it is a hot place to young people and foreigners.

It became a kind of meta cultural place.

>> It has become a kind of meta-cultural place.

Anyway, there, the business has been very successful.

>> Correct

Now I can see him on tv very easily.

>> Correct

Korean conservative point of view to the sexual minority has changed although there is still that of view.

>> The conservative point of view of Koreans to sexual minority has changed although there is still such view.

I think he is so brave man.

>> I think he is a very brave man.

He chose truly life for himself despite the prejudice.

>> He chose to be his true self despite the prejudice.

Until now, He has been fighting with it.
>> Until now, he is fighting with it.
1. If you have one sister, which of the following sentences is correctly punctuated?
b. My sister, Julia, has been working on a novel at her local Starbucks.
>> Correct
2. Six months _____ too long to wait for approval.
a. is
>> Correct
 3. Which of the following sentences is preferable?
b. The project lasted only three months.
>> Correct
4. The number of lawsuits _____ increasing.
b. is
>> Correct
5. Which of the following sentences is correct?
b. Overcome with homesickness, the analyst found it hard to concentrate on his work.
>> Correct
 The last sentence, ‘Overcome with homesickness, the analyst found it hard to concentrate on his work’ is not understood exactly by me.

>> Correct

‘Overcome’ is a verb.

>> Correct

So, is this order sentence?

>> So, is this sentence in order?

I think, the two parts make sense.

>> Correct

But they can’t be connected.

>> Correct