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HOMEWORK FOR TODAY: Regardless of whether or not you are religious, do you believe that there is an almighty God controlling our world? When I was a freshman in a university, I joined the club, ESF. It means Evangelical Students Fellowship. Although I was not religious person, some seniors recommended it to me. There, I had the strong faith for God while I was learning the Bible. So I believed in God strongly. I spent so much time studying Bible, praying for God. Also, I contributed quite much money to our church and became close friends like me. At that time. I felt that an almighty God is beside me and the God was affecting to my whole life. Now, I don't have these kinds of passion. On Sundays I even don’t go to the church. Maybe no one thinks that I am a christian. But I don’t deny the God. Whenever I meet my faithful friends, I sometimes feel guilty. If some friends of mine hesitate having the faith and are not sure whether they need to go church or not, I advised them to have faith and I told them it is just my fault for me not to go to church and not to have active faith life. The reason why I can tell them these things is that I learnt the Bible very carefully. The Bible tells us everything like our history, origin, sin, revival and permanent life. Of course, the complex world and universe are being controlled by the almighty God. I am sure that if someone reads the Bible, he or she cannot help believing it. Our bodies, universe, ecosystem etc are very complicated. I think it cannot be just by accident. But I know, it is irony that it is said by me. Maybe One of the most faithless people would be me.

Hi there, Ms. [이름]! Thank you for your composition! I respect your opinion about this matter. We are all entitled to believe in whatever we choose to believe in. From my personal point of view, the most important thing is to live a good life by not doing anything that will harm others. T. JanE ^^ HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:Regardless of whether or not you are religious, do you believe that there is an almighty God controlling our world?>> Correct When I was a freshman in a university, I joined the club, ESF. >> When I was a freshamn in a university, I joined a club called ESF. It means Evangelical Students Fellowship. >> Correct Although I was not religious person, some seniors recommended it to me. >> Although I wasn\'t a religious person, some seniors recommended it to me. There, I had the strong faith for God while I was learning the Bible. >> Then, I had a strong faith in God while I was learning the Bible. So I believed in God strongly. >> Correct I spent so much time studying Bible, praying for God. >> I spent so much time reading the Bible, praying to God. Also, I contributed quite much money to our church and became close friends like me. >> Also, I contributed much money to our church and I became close to the members of the fellowship. At that time. I felt that an almighty God is beside me and the God was affecting to my whole life. >> At that time, I felt that an Almighty God was beside, and He affected my whole life. Now, I don\'t have these kinds of passion. >> Now, I don\'t have this kind of passion. On Sundays I even don’t go to the church. >> On Sundays, I don\'t even go to church. Maybe no one thinks that I am a christian. >> Maybe no one would think that I am a Christian. But I don’t deny the God. >> But I don\'t deny the existence of God. Whenever I meet my faithful friends, I sometimes feel guilty. >> Correct If some friends of mine hesitate having the faith and are not sure whether they need to go church or not, I advised them to have faith and I told them it is just my fault for me not to go to church and not to have active faith life. >> If some friends of mine hesitate whether to have faith or not, if they aren\'t sure whether they have to go to church or not, I advise them to have faith and explain that it\'s my fault not to go to church and not to be faithful. The reason why I can tell them these things is that I learnt the Bible very carefully. >> Correct The Bible tells us everything like our history, origin, sin, revival and permanent life. >> Correct Of course, the complex world and universe are being controlled by the almighty God. >> Correct I am sure that if someone reads the Bible, he or she cannot help believing it. >> I am sure that if someone reads the Bible, s/he cannot help but believe it. Our bodies, universe, ecosystem etc. are very complicated. >> Correct I think it cannot be just by accident. >> I think their existence is not purely accidental. But I know, it is irony that it is said by me. >> But I know it is ironical that it is said by me. Maybe one of the most faithless people would be me. >> Correct