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2014-02-21 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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What do you usually do when you catch colds? Do you drink medicine immediately or do you do home remedies first? Share your thoughts. If I catch colds, I would take a rest at home and drink hot water a lot. And also usually I take a vitamin C like fresh fruits. But I think if you have a high fever, it is the best way to go to the medical clinic.

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Good day Ms. [Name]! Happy Friday! You shared your ideas well. Thank you for sending this in.^^ It\'s good to hear that you are knowledgable about the things needed to be done. Great! Thank you for always being a good student of mine. ^^ Keep on writing! Have a wonderful weekend! Teacher Nina   What do you usually do when you catch colds? Do you drink medicine immediately or do you do home remedies first? Share your thoughts. If I catch colds, I would take a rest at home and drink hot water a lot. >> If I catch colds, I would take a rest at home and drink a lot of hot water. And also usually I take a vitamin C like fresh fruits. >> And also I usually eat fruits that are rich in Vitamin C.But I think if you have a high fever, it is the best way to go to the medical clinic. >> But I think if you have a high fever, the best way is to go to a medical clinic. >> OR: But if you have a high fever, it is better to go to a medical clinic and seek a doctor.

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