HW
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What do you usually do when you catch colds? Do you drink medicine immediately or do you do home remedies first? Share your thoughts.
If I catch colds, I would take a rest at home and drink hot water a lot.
And also usually I take a vitamin C like fresh fruits.
But I think if you have a high fever, it is the best way to go to the medical clinic.
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Good day Ms. [Name]!
Happy Friday!
You shared your ideas well. Thank you for sending this in.^^
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Thank you for always being a good student of mine. ^^ Keep on writing!
Have a wonderful weekend!
Teacher Nina
What do you usually do when you catch colds? Do you drink medicine immediately or do you do home remedies first? Share your thoughts. If I catch colds, I would take a rest at home and drink hot water a lot.
>> If I catch colds, I would take a rest at home and drink a lot of hot water. And also usually I take a vitamin C like fresh fruits.
>> And also I usually eat fruits that are rich in Vitamin C.But I think if you have a high fever, it is the best way to go to the medical clinic.
>> But I think if you have a high fever, the best way is to go to a medical clinic.
>> OR: But if you have a high fever, it is better to go to a medical clinic and seek a doctor.
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