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학생이 쓴 원문
please correct the sentences. Thank you nina.
Why tight jeans are bad for your health?
Because, it makes the blood flow in your legs difficult and slow.
What are those to make tight?
Bends make ver tight.
강사 첨삭
Happy Friday again Ms. [Name]!
Oh! It\'s my pleasure! Thank you for trusting me.
Do you wear tight jeans? Why/ Why not?
Actually, I was not able to understand the last part of your composition.
I hope that I was able to help you.
If you have any concerns or questions about it, feel free to ask me.
I\'m looking forward to hear from you again. See you!
Teacher Nina
please correct the sentences.
>> Correct!
>> Better: Please correct the sentences below.
Thank you nina.
>> Correct!
>> Better: Thank you Nina.
>> OR: Thank you, Nina. Why tight jeans are bad for your health?
>> Correct!Because, it makes the blood flow in your legs difficult and slow.
>> It is because it will slow down the blood circulation in your legs.
>> OR: It is because the blood circulation will be impede. What are those to make tight?
>> Did you mean: What are those things that make it tight? Bends make ver tight.
>> Did you mean: Belt is used to tighten our pants.
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