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In not more than 10 sentences, write your thoughts about the following topic:
It has been said, "Not everything that is learned is contained in books." Compare and contrast knowledge gained from experience with knowledge gained from books. In your opinion, which source is more important? Why?
Basically, I think both of them are different and they can’t be compared in a certain standard. But if I should do, I think the Knowledge from experience is more important or more effective to people. The Knowledge from book is like some advice or direction. When we get the knowledge from books or respected people, some reasons stop us from doing as we read or heard. First, we don’t know exactly how much important it is because it is not ours actually. Also, sometimes it is very difficult to follow or get the knowledge from books. It looks far away from me. So although we can’t get it or follow it, this seems not to be bad. But the real experience don’t have these kinds of weak points. it is perfectly ours.
It can’t be denied or ignored. So we can get it into our lives well.
That is reason why the real thing is better than the secondhand experience.
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In not more than 10 sentences, write your thoughts about the following topic:It has been said, \"Not everything that is learned is contained in books.\" Compare and contrast knowledge gained from experience with knowledge gained from books. In your opinion, which source is more important? Why?>> Correct Basically, I think both of them are different and they can’t be compared in a certain standard.
>> Correct
But if I should do, I think the Knowledge from experience is more important or more effective to people.
>> But if I should do, I think knowledge from experience is more important or more effective to people.
The Knowledge from book is like some advice or direction.
>> Knowledge from books is like an advice or instruction.
When we get the knowledge from books or respected people, some reasons stop us from doing as we read or heard.
>> When we gain knowledge from books or respected people, some reasons stop us from doing as we read or heard.
First, we don\'t know exactly how much important it is because it is not ours actually.
>> First, we don\'t know exactly how important it is because it is not actually ours.
Also, sometimes it is very difficult to follow or get the knowledge from books. >> Also, sometimes it is very difficult to follow or get knowledge from books.
It looks far away from me.
>> Correct
So although we can’t get it or follow it, this seems not to be bad.
>> Correct
But the real experience don’t have these kinds of weak points.
>> But real experience doesn\'t have these kinds of weak points.
It is perfectly ours. >> Correct
or >> It is completely ours.
It can’t be denied or ignored.
>> Correct
So we can get it into our lives well.>> Correct
That is reason why the real thing is better than the secondhand experience.>> That is the reason why real things are better than secondhand experience.
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