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2014-02-26 · 첨삭 강사 Jane

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Imagine that you found a big bag of cash on the street or sidewalk, would you take it to the police, or keep it for yourself? Using this question, if the money was taken by the person who saw it, do you think that this person should be convicted of a crime even though he did not steal? To tell the truth, I will take it. I think I’m not honest enough to bring it to the police station and even not rich. Imagining this situation, getting it, maybe I would be very afraid of being watched my action. Actually, in the similar case, I have pick 50 thousand won. When I went out of the subway station, I saw a piece of paper money, 50 thousand won. There were some people and I was sure that a person who was right in front of me was the owner of the money. When I told her to pick up your money, however, she said that it was not hers. Right after, confused, I picked it up and walked away with very quick steps. At that time, I was very afraid that someone ran after me and blamed on me. But nothing happened and it became mine. Someone who lost money has the priority responsibility of the situation. Anyway I don’t think that picking the money bag on the street is guilt. It could be not being honest.

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Hi there, Ms. [이름]! Thank you for your composition! I appreciate your honesty. I understand that it\'s really difficult to be in that situation. When I was in third grade in elementary school, I found 500 pesos while walking to our shop. I thought it was just a play money, but I picked it up and put it in my pocket so I could play with it with my brothers. After an hour or two, a man came looking for his 500 pesos. I took the money out of my pocket and checked if it was real money. To my surprise, it was not fake! So, I gave the money back to him remembering what my parents and teachers taught me about honesty. To my dismay, he just took the money from me and walked away without even saying \"thank you\". I was really disappointed. T. JanE ^^ Imagine that you found a big bag of cash on the street or sidewalk, would you take it to the police, or keep it for yourself? Using this question, if the money was taken by the person who saw it, do you think that this person should be convicted of a crime even though he did not steal?>> CorrectTo tell the truth, I will take it. >> To tell the truth, I would take it. I think I’m not honest enough to bring it to the police station and even not rich. >> I think I\'m not honest and not even rich enough to bring the money to the police station. Imagining this situation, getting it, maybe I would be very afraid of being watched my action. >> Imagining this situation, If I would get it, maybe I would be really afraid of being watched. Actually, in the similar case, I have pick 50 thousand won. >> Actually, I experienced a similar case wherein I picked 50 thousand Won. When I went out of the subway station, I saw a piece of paper money, 50 thousand won. >> When I went out of the subway station, I saw a piece of a paper bill. It was 50 thousand Won. There were some people and I was sure that a person who was right in front of me was the owner of the money. >> Correct When I told her to pick up your money, however, she said that it was not hers. >> When I told her to pick her money up, she said it wasn\'t hers. Right after, confused, I picked it up and walked away with very quick steps. >> Correct At that time, I was very afraid that someone ran after me and blamed on me. >> At that time, I was afraid that someone would run after me and blame me. But nothing happened and it became mine. >> Correct Someone who lost money has the priority responsibility of the situation.>> Someone who lost money must be responsible for that situation. Anyway I don’t think that picking the money bag on the street is guilt. >> Anyway, I don\'t think that getting a bag of money on the street is something to be guilty of. It could be not being honest. >> It could just be a question of honesty.

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