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학생이 쓴 원문
I like Killer whale.
I like predetors.
Killer whale is smart,strong,and dangerous.
They get out of the ocean and go to the beach and eat seals.
강사 첨삭
A delightful Thursday afternoon to you Tom!
Wow! A perfect composition! Yipee!
You composed wonderful and meaningful sentences today. Keep it up!
Oh! I\'m scared of killer whales. I find seals cute!
Do you like watching movies about whales? You can tell me your answers in class.
See you! Enjoy the rest of the day!
Teacher Nina
I like Killer whale.
>> Correct
>> OR: I am interested in killer whales. I like predetors.
>> Correct ( Spelling check: predators ^^ )Killer whale is smart,strong,and dangerous.
>> Correct
>> Better: A killer whale is smart, strong and dangerous.
>> OR: Killer whales are smart, strong and dangerous.They get out of the ocean and go to the beach and eat seals.
>> Correct
>> Better: They get out of the ocean, go to the beach and eat seals.
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