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2014-03-06 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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I like Killer whale. I like predetors. Killer whale is smart,strong,and dangerous. They get out of the ocean and go to the beach and eat seals.

강사 첨삭

A delightful Thursday afternoon to you Tom! Wow! A perfect composition! Yipee! You composed wonderful and meaningful sentences today. Keep it up! Oh! I\'m scared of killer whales. I find seals cute! Do you like watching movies about whales? You can tell me your answers in class. See you! Enjoy the rest of the day! Teacher Nina   I like Killer whale. >> Correct >> OR: I am interested in killer whales. I like predetors. >> Correct ( Spelling check: predators ^^ )Killer whale is smart,strong,and dangerous. >> Correct >> Better: A killer whale is smart, strong and dangerous. >> OR: Killer whales are smart, strong and dangerous.They get out of the ocean and go to the beach and eat seals. >> Correct >> Better: They get out of the ocean, go to the beach and eat seals.

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