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Who was your greatest hero as a child?
my greatest hero was father
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Good evening again [이름] Ho. :)
Thank you for making your assignment early. Anyways, it would be better if you gave a reason why you consider your father your greatest hero. But it was nice to know that you see your father as your hero. :)
As for the homework, you are making a sentence so it would be better if you capitalize the first letter of the first word and place a punctuation mark in the end of the sentence. That is the right way to write a sentence. :) Maybe you can try writing paragraphs so that you will be able to practice the right sentence construction. :)
Anyways, I hope you have a good night sleep my dear [이름] ho. :)
I\'ll call you again tomorrow.
Good night. :)
T. Tanya ^_^
Who was your greatest hero as a child?
my greatest hero was father
>> My greatest hero was my father.
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