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2014-03-12 · 첨삭 강사 Tanya

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Make a composition about the things that you like doing most and why do you like doing them. I like playing computer game most because ican play it togrther with my friends

강사 첨삭

Good evening again my dear [이름] Ho. :)   Wow, your compositions are really short. Maybe you can try to elaborate more your answers so that you can also practice your grammar. :) And also, be mindful with your spelling. The word \"I\" is also capitalized in sentences because it is actually referring to a person, and it is also called a personal pronoun. :)   Anyways, thank you for sending in your homework early, as always. :) Enjoy the rest of the night [이름] Ho. I\'ll see you tomorrow. :)   T. Tanya ^_^   Make a composition about the things that you like doing most and why do you like doing them.I like playing computer game most because ican play it togrther with my friends >> I like playing computer games most because I can play it with my friends.

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