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What was your greatest achievement in life? Explain your answer.
My greatest achievment was on first place to exam
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Hello again [이름] Ho. :)
You are one smart kid. :) You are good with computers and you are really good in your class. :) Anyways, it would be better if you told me more about how you felt when you were first in your exam. It would be a good practice for your grammar. And also, be mindful with your spelling and your punctuation marks. When you make a sentence, you should always place a punctuation mark in the end. It may be period, question mark or exclamation point; depending on the expression of your sentence.
Anyways, have a great night my dear.
I\'ll talk to you again tomorrow. :)
Good night.
T. Tanya ^_^
What was your greatest achievement in life? Explain your answer.My greatest achievment was on first place to exam
>> My greatest achievement was when I placed first in the exam.
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