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2014-04-12 · 첨삭 강사 ali

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I'm sometimes influenced by what I see on TV. For an example,when my mom is shopping on TV. Then I am influenced by what i see on TV.

강사 첨삭

Hi there Tom!

Oh! Me too! Whenever I see beautiful goods or clothes on TV, I sometimes look for it immediately in the department store.

I do understand you. Media influences people to do good or to do the other way around.

We should be careful with the things we watch. Some shows can help us to be a better person but other shows don\'t\'.

What kind of program on TV do you usually watch? You can tell it in class.

See you!

Teacher Nina

 

I\'m sometimes influenced by what I see on TV.

>> Correct

>> OR: I am sometimes affected on what I see on TV.
For an example,when my mom is shopping on TV.

>> For example, when my mom shops on TV.

>> OR: For example, when my mom watched
Then I am influenced by what i see on TV.

>> Then, I am influenced by it.

>> OR: I am influenced to see that item. ( The next sentence should answer this question: It influenced you to what? )

>> OR: I am influenced to give an idea about it.

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