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학생이 쓴 원문
It was quite special holiday because my older brother is going to be away from home for 3 months.
He's going to America to study English.
He asked me to help him pack is luggage.
He had no idea what to prepare.
I advised and recommended many things he might need.
I also went shopping with him to buy what he needs.
On the other days, I had a date with my boy friend.
When I met him, the wherther was so nice, so we went to the central park for a walk and chatted until dinner time on the bench.
As soon as I was back home, I and my family enjoyed the king crab and the lobster which my parents bought for my brother.
These are what I did during my holiday.
강사 첨삭
Hi there Ms. [이름]!
Thanks for sharing all the things that you did during your holiday.
And I am glad that you helped your older brother prepare his stuffs.
He was actually unsure what to bring as what he had told me during our class.
Anyway, it\'s nice to meet you to.
Have a great evening!
Always,
Kathrine ^^
>> It was quite a special holiday because my older brother is going to be away from home for 3 months.
He\'s going to America to study English.
He\'s going to America to study English.
>> correct!
He asked me to help him pack is luggage.
He asked me to help him pack is luggage.
>> correct!
He had no idea what to prepare.
He had no idea what to prepare.
>> correct!
I advised and recommended many things he might need.
I advised and recommended many things he might need.
>> correct!
I also went shopping with him to buy what he needs.
I also went shopping with him to buy what he needs.
>> correct!
On the other days, I had a date with my boy friend.
On the other days, I had a date with my boy friend.
>> correct!
When I met him, the wherther was so nice, so we went to the central park for a walk and chatted until dinner time on the bench.
When I met him, the wherther was so nice, so we went to the central park for a walk and chatted until dinner time on the bench.
>> correct! (spelling correction-weather)
As soon as I was back home, I and my family enjoyed the king crab and the lobster which my parents bought for my brother.
As soon as I was back home, I and my family enjoyed the king crab and the lobster which my parents bought for my brother.
>> correct!
>> or: As soon as I went back home, me and my family enjoyed the king crab and the lobster which my parents bought for my brother.
These are what I did during my holiday.
These are what I did during my holiday.
>> correct!
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