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2014-05-07 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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I'm sad when i notice my parents growing older. I want to live together with my family. I'll find a machine for don't die.

강사 첨삭

Hi there Tom! Happy Wednesday! I am so excited to talk to you.^^How was your holiday? I hope that you really had a great time. Me too, I feel really sad that my parents are getting older. I think we should really use our time effectively with our parents. Let us always make them happy, right? What do you usually do to make your parents happy when you have a free time? Tell it in class. See you in class. Teacher Nina   I\'m sad when i notice my parents growing older. >> I\'m sad when I notice my parents are growing older. ( Capitalization: I ^^) >> OR: I feel sad when I notice my parents are getting older. I want to live together with my family. >> Correct!I\'ll find a machine for don\'t die. >> Did you mean: I will find a machine that will prevent people to die.

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