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2014-08-01 · 첨삭 강사 Kathrine

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Experience is the best teacher in life. Did you have an experience that helped you avoid the same mistake that may be harmful in your life? ------------------------------------------------------------ In my experience talking less and thinking more are very important. Sometimes i used harmful express without any thinkings. It was just kidding but,i realrezed somebody could be hurt becauseof my saying. So, I always try to say after thinking deeply.

강사 첨삭

 Hi there again Ms. [Name]!

Well, we have this saying, \"think before you speak,\"

Sometimes we are being carried away by our emotions that we could not think clearly of what we are saying.
Even if we say that we are only joking but there are still some other people who could be hurt because of what we have said.

It is good that you have realized the importance of thinking first before you will say something.

Thanks for sharing your thoughts!
See you later!

Have a great day ahead!


Always,

Kathrine ^^


Experience is the best teacher in life. Did you have an experience that helped you avoid the same mistake that may be harmful in your life?
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In my experience talking less and thinking more are very important. 

>>  correct!
 Sometimes i used harmful express without any thinkings.

>>  Sometimes, I am using hurtful expressions without any thinking.

It was just kidding but,i realrezed somebody could be hurt becauseof my saying.

>>  I was just kidding but after sometime, I realized that somebody could be hurt because of what I said.
 So, I always try to say after thinking deeply.

>>  So I am always trying to think before I speak.

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