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Hello Jenna! ^^
Well, traveling to Amazon is included in my bucket list actually. haha.
How I wish I could go there too.
Exploring the unknown and unusual places sound exciting and adventurous for me.
And I have watch a cartoon series of Heidi when I was young.
I still remember her face and some scenes there.
It seems like it is really fun to live in the Alps.
Anyway, hopefully you could go there. ^^
See you later my dear!
Always,
Kathrine ^^
If I will have had enough money, time and stamina to go on an expedition , then, I would like to go to the area of amazon which is not too dangerous before I die.
>> If I will have enough money, time, and stamina to go to an expedition, then I would like to go to an area in the Amazon which is not too dangerous before I die.
In the Amazon, I don\'t want to discover something and just watching for do not diying?
>> In the Amazon, I don\'t want to discover something and I just watch and observe things which would not kill me.
But I really hate mosquitos and bugs.
>> correct!
So.. this is the lastest choice.
>> So this is the least choice I have.
And I want to go to the Alps.
>> correct!
when I child , I read The Heidi of alps which was written by Johanna Spyri.
>> When I was a child, I read about the Heidi of Alps which was written by Johanna Spyri.
I was impressed from that book.
>> I am impressed by that book.
If I go there, I really want to have a taste of the milk and cheese of the Alps.
>> If I will go there, I really want to taste the milk and cheese of the Alps.
Because I have had some assume that it will have a good taste when I taste in local area even if I don\'t like milk much.
>> Because I have tasted milk and cheese in a local area in my country so I have assumed that it will really taste good.
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