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The fruit that I told you is green plum.
It is good for our Stomachache and sore throat.
It is litle bit sour but when we eat them with sugar or hunny it is really good.
We can make teas,pickled and sause.
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Good evening TOM ^^
Happy Monday!
Thanks for sharing about the fruit that you mentioned. You taught me something new today. ^^
Keep it up! I really admire your determination. ^^
Have a great night.
Take Care!Teacher Nina
The fruit that I told you is green plum.
>> Correct It is good for our Stomachache and sore throat.
>> It is good for stomachache and sore throat.
>> OR: It is a good way to get rid of stomachache and sore throat.It is litle bit sour but when we eat them with sugar or hunny it is really good.
>> It is little bit sour but when we eat it with sugar or honey, it is really good. We can make teas,pickled and sause.
>> We can make a tea, pickels and sauce made of it.
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