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2014-10-22 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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Teacher,I can't understand what you gave me the homework. There is a rumor that H5N1 was made of japanese scientist. H5N1 is very danderous that 50 people died of 100 people. It through to the world to use birds. In fact,there was the child who died because of the H5N1 in tie land.

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Happy Wednesday Tom! Thank you for sharing about H5N1 today. I appreciate that you are knowledgable about that topic. I am impressed that you are trying to use new words to express your ideas. Your homework today, What are you going to do if someone asks money from you? ( Like beggars or homeless people) I\'m going to explain about it tomorrow. Teacher Nina   Teacher,I can\'t understand what you gave me the homework. >> Teacher, I can\'t understand the homework that you gave me. There is a rumor that H5N1 was made of japanese scientist. >> There is a rumor that H5N1 was made by a Japanese scientist. H5N1 is very danderous that 50 people died of 100 people. >> H5N1 is a very dangerous that fifty died out of one hundred people who are affected by it.It through to the world to use birds. >> Did you mean: It spread throughout the world who uses birds. >> OR: It spread throughout the world because of birds. In fact,there was the child who died because of the H5N1 in tie land. >> In fact, there was a child who died because of H5N1.

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