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2014-10-23 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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I will not allow to lend money because in korea,there are many fraud. But,if they really need the money I will lend them. But there is the condition like to pay the money until ~~~. I don't know what is the wiswest desision.

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Good evening TOM! It\'s Thursday! Wow! I admire you, you are really a great and understanding person. Your love ones and friends are so lucky to have you. The corrections are provided below for your further improvement. If you have any questions, feel free to ask me tomorrow. Teacher Nina   I will not allow to lend money because in korea,there are many fraud. >> I won\'t lend my money because there are many scammers in Korea. >> OR: I won\'t lend my money because there are many fraudelent people in Korea.But,if they really need the money I will lend them. >> But, if they really need money I will lend them.But there is the condition like to pay the money until ~~~. >> But there is a condition, they have to pay the money on a specific date. >> OR: But there is a condition, they have to pay the money after some time.I don\'t know what is the wiswest desision. >> Did you mean: I don\'t know the meaning of \"wisest decision\". ( It means the best decision you made. ^^)

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