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2014-10-28 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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who that who that who that who who that that I don't l like to eat chocolates anymore because it is so sweet. But I still like some chocolates like huch and ABC. And I want to try to eat Cacao with sugar and creem. I wonder how taste is that. PS:I'll sent the thank note to my parents tonight.

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Hi there Tom! Thank you so much for your time today. I am so grateful that you are my student. You did a good job with your homework. I am excited to read your thank you note for your parents. I hope that you\'ll continue improving your skills. ^^ Take Care!Teacher Nina   who >> correct OR: That that >> correctwho >> correct OR: That that >> correct OR: who who >> correct OR: That that >> correct who >> correct OR: That who that >> correct that >> correct OR: That thatI don\'t l like to eat chocolates anymore because it is so sweet. >> correct >> OR: I don\'t like eating chocolates because it too sweet. >> OR: I seldom eat chocolates because it too sweet.But I still like some chocolates like huch and ABC. >> correct And I want to try to eat Cacao with sugar and creem. >> And I want to try eating Cacao with sugar and cream.I wonder how taste is that. >> I wonder how it tastes. PS:I\'ll sent the thank note to my parents tonight. >> P.S. I\'ll send the thank you note for my parents tonight.

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