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I don't l like to eat chocolates anymore because it is so sweet.
But I still like some chocolates like huch and ABC.
And I want to try to eat Cacao with sugar and creem.
I wonder how taste is that.
PS:I'll sent the thank note to my parents tonight.
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Hi there Tom!
Thank you so much for your time today.
I am so grateful that you are my student.
You did a good job with your homework.
I am excited to read your thank you note for your parents.
I hope that you\'ll continue improving your skills. ^^
Take Care!Teacher Nina
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thatI don\'t l like to eat chocolates anymore because it is so sweet.
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>> And I want to try eating Cacao with sugar and cream.I wonder how taste is that.
>> I wonder how it tastes. PS:I\'ll sent the thank note to my parents tonight.
>> P.S. I\'ll send the thank you note for my parents tonight.
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