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2014-10-29 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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short deep ? short thin big outside empty down. THere is some Rock music made by JOm johnston. One of my freind like to watch WWE wresling. And He told me his favorite Rock music are Written my face and Fings of kings. I listened that music and It was good.

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A magnificent mid-week to you Tom! Thanks for sending your homework tonight. I think you were a bit confused with your homework. Don\'t worry, you did a good job. You just have to be mindful of the usage of words. Please go over your corrections. If you have any questions, please raise it in class. I am always here for you. Teacher Nina   >> dangerous short >> narrow deep>> correct ? >> expensiveshort >> correct thin >> correct big >> loose outside >> correct empty >> correct down. >> correct THere is some Rock music made by JOm johnston. >> There is a Rock music that is made by Jon Johnston. One of my freind like to watch WWE wresling. >> One of my friends like to watch WWE wrestling. And He told me his favorite Rock music are Written my face and Fings of kings. >> And he told me that his favorite rock music are written by Face and Fings of Kings.I listened that music and It was good. >> I listened to the music and it was good. >> OR: I listened to the song and it was good.

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