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Good job Tom! Happy Thursday. Thanks for being such a wonderful and great student. The story that you shared is a bit awful. I\'m curious why do those shrimps kill the others? Can you tell me in class? I hope to hear more stories from you. Kindly go over the corrections below. Don\'t forget to go over your corrections everyday for your further improvement. Take Care! Hope to talk to you again very soon.Teacher Nina   \"What\" is usually a question word. \"The book that I need\" is the correct one. Here is the explanation: \"What\" is usually a question word. Examples:\"What are you doing?\"\"What are these?\"\"What is your idea?\" \"What\" can also be used with the meaning of \"the thing or things\". Here are some examples:\"What you need is a good night sleep.\" (= The thing you need is a good night sleep.)\"We don\'t know what to do.\" (= We don\'t know which things to do.)\"You know what to do.\" (= You know which things to do.) \"That\" is used to describe and define the thing you are talking about. For example:\"I want the pen.\"\"Which pen?\"\"I want the pen that is on the desk.\" Here\'s another example:\"I saw that girl.\"\"Which girl?\"\"The girl that you invited to the party.\" Now, regarding your specific sentence:\"The book what I need\" would mean \"the book which thing I need.\"This doesn\'t make sense, does it? On the other hand: \"The book that I need\" makes perfect sense, because you are giving a description of the book. What >> correct what >> that what >> correct that >> correct That >> what that >> correct that >> correct that >> what what >> that what>> correct I saw the shrimps hunting unother shrimp in my fish tank. >> I saw the shrimps hunting the another shrimp in my fish tank. >> OR: I saw the shrimps hunting the others in my fish tank. >> OR: I saw the shrimps hunting the others of its kind in my fish tank.They weren\'t quickly killed the shrimps. >> They weren\'t quickly killed by the shrimps. >> OR: They weren\'t quickly killed by the others. It was so awful that I can\'t watch it. >> correct THe water became a bit white. >> correct >> OR: The water became whitish.