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2014-11-03 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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I got an award for invention things. I'm so glad and proud of myself. Maybe I will ahve a national invention contest again. It will be fun because I have experience about what happen during the contest already.

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Wow! Tom! I am so proud of you! Oh my god! You are really good at inventing things. Of course, take all the opportunities that will come your way. You will be able to learn a lot. I am sure that you will do your best again. I hope to see the thing you invented again. Keep up the good work my dear student. Good evening! Teacher Nina   I got an award for invention things. >> I got an award for the things I invented.>> OR: I received an award for the things I invented. I\'m so glad and proud of myself. >> correct Maybe I will ahve a national invention contest again. >> Maybe I will join a National Invention contest again.>> OR: Maybe I will be a part of a National Invention contest again.It will be fun because I have experience about what happen during the contest already. >> It will be fun because I already have an experience joining that kind of contest. >> OR: It will be fun because I already know what happens during the contest. 

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