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학생이 쓴 원문
I got an award for invention things.
I'm so glad and proud of myself.
Maybe I will ahve a national invention contest again.
It will be fun because I have experience about what happen during the contest already.
강사 첨삭
Wow! Tom! I am so proud of you!
Oh my god! You are really good at inventing things.
Of course, take all the opportunities that will come your way.
You will be able to learn a lot. I am sure that you will do your best again.
I hope to see the thing you invented again. Keep up the good work my dear student. Good evening!
Teacher Nina
I got an award for invention things.
>> I got an award for the things I invented.>> OR: I received an award for the things I invented. I\'m so glad and proud of myself.
>> correct Maybe I will ahve a national invention contest again.
>> Maybe I will join a National Invention contest again.>> OR: Maybe I will be a part of a National Invention contest again.It will be fun because I have experience about what happen during the contest already.
>> It will be fun because I already have an experience joining that kind of contest.
>> OR: It will be fun because I already know what happens during the contest.
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