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2014-11-06 · 첨삭 강사 Kathrine

학생이 쓴 원문

My essay that its title is “what is the best advice in your life?” was gone. As you know, while I was writing my essay, my computer started to update itself. I don’t know why, but after updating, My writing was gone.ㅜㅜ I want to write it again but I can’t remember it all. Plus I feel tired to write same thing again. But I love this kind of essay homework. To me, the essay type is better than a multiple choice method. I will try to write an essay every day and I hope my writing ability gets higher and higher. I need your help. I can do this with you. Thank you.

강사 첨삭

Hi there again Ms. [Name]!

Well, thanks for finding some time to write this one even if you felt tired. kkk

And don\'t you worry because we could improve more your writing skills.

I would give you more essays if that\'s what you like. ^^

See you later!

Always,
Kathrine ^^

My essay that its title is “what is the best advice in your life?” was gone.

>> The title of my essay, \"What is the best advice in your life?\" was gone.
As you know, while I was writing my essay, my computer started to update itself.

>> correct!
I don’t know why, but after updating, My writing was gone.ㅜㅜ

>> I don\'t know why, but after updating, my writing was already gone.

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